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Thursday, 18 September 2014

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Stretched beyond all possible limits his gaze into the the distance was unbroken. A sea of sand lay before him. Behind was a cloud of smoke and the smell of burning rubber tweaked his nostril hairs as he gulped down fresh air. A puddle of water mixed with bubbling oil quickly disappeared and vapourised into oblivion. Moving slowly, head pounding, he started putting one foot in front of the other. He only had one chance...




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  2. Stretched beyond all possible limits his gaze into the the distance was unbroken. A sea of sand lay before him. Behind was a cloud of smoke and the smell of burning rubber tweaked his nostril hairs as he gulped down fresh air. A puddle of water mixed with bubbling oil quickly disappeared and vaporised into oblivion. Moving slowly, head pounding, he started putting one foot in front of the other. He only had one chance…

    He only had one chance to find help. His feet dragged through the sand. He struggled to find fresh, clean water. His eyesight was turning blurry. Suddenly, he fell to the ground, with his hands dug into the hot, smooth, golden sand struggling to get up. His eyes were twitching as they slowly closed…

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  3. He was lost and lonely in the sea of sand, he was walking slower and slower, his mouth was dry, his chin was sweating, he was puffed, his body was getting hotter, it was hard for him to get fresh air.

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  4. His whole body was covered in cuts. His legs were saturated in oil. The smell of fire grew stronger. He awoken breathing sand. He tried to pull himself up but the grains of sand slip through his hands. It was too late…...


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  5. He slowly started to move forward, the thought of not seeing his family kept crossing his mind. Then the sound of engines filled the air, he grabbed a stick and wrote a message in the sand but the plane didn’t stop, his smile just turned upside down and a tear dropped down from his eye. There was a large trail of redness following him, the man fell to his knees, collapsed onto the sand, his breathing stopped and his eyes shut very slowly.

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  6. He only had one chance. ls he going to live? Nobody was around him. His head was bleeding. It was silent. As he gazed around not even a bird tweeted.

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  8. He only had one chance. He gazed around. It was silent. Not even a snake was slithering by. He had tears running down his face. Walking sadly, putting one foot in front of the other, he wondered is there going to be a tomorrow?

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  9. Putting one foot in front of the other with blood drying all over his head and legs. His lips as dry as the sand and his face as red as a rip apple. He heard a hissing sound from behind him...

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  10. He was driving along the road he past a big wide long desert. He crashed there was water with bubbling oil. He was moving slowly with his one hand to the other. He tried to crawl out of the car. He was walking alone in the big wide long desert. He only had one chance…



    He only had one chance to find someone to help him. he dragged his leg in the hot sizzling sand. The sun made him fall down because it was burning hot and sizzling. He walked past some burnt ugly looking birds on the ground. When he got to the middle of the desert there were birds all over the place scrambled up and cooked with some sand in them they were just lying there doing nothing.

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  11. Tears fell down. He was imagining someone helping him. Then he felt something crawling up his legs. He looked down. He could hear sizzling. Bubbles were popping like popcorn. His legs were burnt. They were red like an angry face...

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  12. He only had one chance, there was nobody around him, he was lost and upset from breaking his car. His leg was cut and his arms were burning hot from the sun.

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  13. His mouth was dry, He took off his t-shirt and fell instantly onto the ground. He stood up slowly but was weak. He looked where he was and didn’t hear anything but his heart pumping.

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